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The communist state has power over the economy and their citizens. The purpose of creating Communism is to be equally rich whether you are a party leader, a doctor, or a janitor. Karl Marx, the father of Communism’s intention is somewhat outstanding; however, this Utopian ideal has had trouble surviving in the real world. The communist government provides everyone’s salary equally. In other words, hardworking labourers become lazy because they receive the same salary as lazy workers. They realize working hard or lazy does not matter. Another problem is the ideal theology of Marx has never distributed the available money equally. It is human nature to find some kind of hierarchy and to strive for the top. .Although, labourers would get medical care, education, and housing, they cannot be as rich as high-ranking party officials.
No, the purpose of Communism was never "to be equally rich." It is not only under Communist governments that workers become lazy, they do under democratic governments too. Once you enter the workforce you will see it. Marx’s political and economical theories cannot be categorized as "theology" – which is the study of God(s) and the nature of Religion. It is also human nature to help others in need, and even those who have "reached the top" in their hierarchical system recognize the value of the good publicity a charity ball will give them. Receiving medical care, education, and housing is a Right – if a truly democratic government cannot provide its citizens with these – then the citizens have the Right to change the form of their government.